2009年考研英语作文真题:网络的近与远

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As is vividly shown in the picture,we make communication with others on the Internet without leaving our houses,which make contributions to a disagreement whether the development of the Internet makes human beings distance small. We can see from the picture,people chat with others on the Internet instead of meeting them who we want to talk.It causes a problem that we have no communication with others in real life.Although the Internet makes it possible for us to chat with people from different areas without worrying about their far distance,we should realize that we cannot bury ourselves in the Internet world.We ought to meet someone who we want to chat with,it helps us to make friends with who we meet,shortening our distance.