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Today, more and more people prefer to choose online shopping instead of shopping on the mall. Online shopping make people's life more convenient and save much time to do other things, but it also bring some problems. Some online sellers want to sell more products, they usually show some beautiful photo and lower price. When buyer order the product, they will find the product is fake and totally different between product and item on the display. People should be care for price during in the online shopping. If the price of the item has amount of difference, don't buy it. Also, buyer need to look the item's details how it was. A detail usually can show how much for the products. Online shopping is not only let our life easily, it also has some problems about the sellers' honesty.
