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文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
Nowadays,a lot of people like to attend to the certificate craze.Many people want to get more certifications although they do not need it at all.people tend to take the examinations but most of them do not clear why they must do that. Why now so many people crazy in the certificate craze?I think the reason why the image appears is that most of them have their own intentions.On the one hand,with the pressure of employment increasing,a large number of people think the certification will be useful to find a good job,which will set a stage for their success.On the other hand,and on some people's eyes,they think the certification is an achievement of their study,they can be satisfied because of it.So there are lots of people willing to put themselves into the crowed of getting diplomas. As far as I am concerned, all of the people should have the clear judgment whether they should attend to the examinations.Otherwise,it is unworthy to spend most of their time on the tests.
