题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
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With the rapid development of modern society, a worrying problem, such as bamboo shoots after a spring rain emerged, reduced the degree of trust between individuals. For example, when we met a beggar because of his disability legs in the street, we consider whether he is lying to us. In addition, in the business world, we consumers can not easily believe that businesses have a guarantee. All of the above problems, reduce adverse consequences. In particular, in the business world the existence of prevalence of dishonest. Effects of these phenomena, we always treat others, guarantee, more cautious, even a word. Therefore, this trend caused much damage to the commodity economy. The fundamental reason of these phenomena is the current people can't trust each other, so keep the most important trust, because the foundation of any relationship, whether it is business partner, spouse, parents, or friends, customers, trust. Trust Is it right? Can accomplish at one stroke. On the contrary, it is through the interaction of personal habits consistent training.