一年级英语作文:A Busy Day

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This is my busy day. I help my mother do housework. I play ping-pong very well. I play baseball. In the afternoon, I have a violin lesson from 2 o'clok to 3 o'clok. After that,I have a piano lesson. It's very boring. At night, I have a science lesson,and it's very very exciting. It's a very busy day.By-By.