高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累；作者词汇表达不够丰富，另外要仔细检查词汇的拼写；连词使用偏少。

Nowing,more and more people like doing sports and all kinds of sports we can do.My favourite sports is playing football at now. I have a chance of bu chance like playing football. Isee a football on the stree on my way home.shortly, my friends play together with me that very like playing this sports. I often jion in Competition and training with my classmates. My favouite star is David Beckham from Englandand my dream is become a prefessional football player.