2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

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Nowadays,many products have the phenomenon of excessive packaging.Often we just find a small number of things in the excessive packaging.The followings are the reasons. Obviuosly,it is the competition among the businessmen that led to excessive packaging.Most of the sellers believe that the excessive packaging which can attract consumers' attention is a good way to make more profit.Owing to this attitude,excessive packaging begins overflowing at the market.However,the most important reason is the mind of consumers.Excessive packaging products seem to be a sign of luxury.The wrong mind leds a wrong produce. In my opinion,excessive packaging is unnecessary.Even worse,it may cause environment pollution.So excessive packaging must be banned.The businessmen should produce properly packaging products.By doing this we can achieve sustained development.