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In memory of the great poet Qu Yuan,the Dragon Boat Festival is one of the Chinese traditional festivals.In history,it is said that poet Qu yuan jumped into the river because of being sad for his country's depression.And people in that dynasty respected him very much,so that they threw food into river to avoid him eaten by fish.Therefore,the custom is passed through generation by generation,and it is what we now called The Dragon Boat Festival. Nowadays,people celebrate the festival and regard it as a Chinese traditional cultrual treasure.On this day,we will eat a sort of chinese traditional food,called zongzi.It is very delicious and has various ways of making in different areas.What's more,there will be many spectacular Dragon Boat Matches everywhere.And we will watch them on TV.It is a wonderful day.People gather and celebrate it.In addition,Qu Yuan's story will be chanted on that day. In a word,The Dragon Boat Festival is a significant and important chinese traditional festival.Celebrating this festival not only can remind us of Qu Yuan's patriotic sprit,but also help us keep our Chinese traditonal inheritence.
