I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.
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Best regards,文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒;熟练使用了一些长难句;文中词汇表达较灵活丰富,不过请检查文章的单词拼写;请注意分段。
With the great fluency of english writhing and burning passion , I'd like to have an english penpal whom i can write to and have fun. I have preference to a girl penpal for i am a girl,too and she'd better be aged around mine so that we are more likely to have something in common and be able to freely communicate.If possible, i hope that she is fond of traveling ,sporting and pets for i am extremely keen of them and eager to have some one who have the same passionate love to chat with! In conclusion,i definitely hope to find a penpal and share her with my taste of life here through english,meanwhile get to know the exotic world beyond my sight