Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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My views on economic globalization Recently,economic globalization has brought into public attention.With the rapi decelopment of economy and remarkable progress of science and technology,economic globalization has become an inevitable in the development of society. Courtries benefit a lot from the economic globalization,especially the developing countries.With it,there is a global market for companie to trade their products which can make the production sector develop rapidly.This gives lots of options to the manufacturers as well.Besides,competition keeps prices relatively low and it can provide a wider range of options for people,to choose from among the products of different nations.In addition,there is a sound flow of money,as a result,inflation is less likely to occur. But the disadvantages brought by globalization can not be ignored.Globalization is causing Europeans to lose their jobs as work is being swerved to the Asian countries is low as compared to other countries which is often argued that poor countries are exploited by the richer countries where the work force is taken advantage of and low wages are implemented.Moreover,companies are as opening their counterparts in other countries which can result in transferring the quality of their product to other countries,there by increasing the chances of poor quality. Simply but, globalization is an ongoing process of integration of regional economies into global network of communication which the humanbeing can not hold back.So we should keep a positive attitude toward it,take good use of it and avoid disadvantages at the same time.Thus there will be a better world where all the people can have a brighter future.