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作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达，一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。
How to a Meaningful Life? Among all the highlighted topics, one"how to live a meaningful life".As for this topic, everyone's opinion varies. As the saying goes, "The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it." I cannot agree with it more. If one spends all his life pursuing benefits for himself, he will surely feel fruitless and meaningless when he gets old. Nelson Mandela's life, we can get that he never wavered in his devotion to democracy, equality and learning. His life has been an inspiration in South Africa and throughout the world. In a life that symbolizes the triumph of human spirit, Nelson Mandela accepted the 1993 Nobel Peace Prize. His life, though limited, definitely lasts longer. That's a life worth living.Therefore, if there is a way to make my life more meaningful, I believe it should be to find something I'm interested in and also is helpful to others or the whole society. Only in this way can I keep my passion throughout my life.
