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Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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A prevailing phenomenon nowadays is that countries on the earth are becoming more and more assimilated. People at every corner of the globe are inclined to share and enjoy the same spiritual as well as material life together. Such a trend has both merits and demerits. As for me, the former prevails over the latter. The drawbacks of such a global village are multifarious. Some people are really concerned about the loss of their national identity. Others feel upset at the prospect of cultural and economic globalization, which will endanger the jobs of people in many industries. In the upcoming future, they are afraid cultural diversity will be a historical term. On the contrary, optimists come up with many novel ideas countering the opinions mentioned above. They feel that globalization will bring more opportunities for the world. The conformity of all the countries in the fields of fashion and entertainment, among many others, will eventually lead to greater harmony. If that were realised, peace might dominate the planet. Appreciation of the same films, music and clothing, etc,will not murder man’s creativity and innovation. The creative spirit in the industries highlighting innovation will only be rejuvenated, not stifled. Besides, improved communications along with globalization will inject more and more momentum to the education industry, with the aspect of language education in particular. This is another aspect of how globalisation benefits the world. All in all, the fact that globalisation has blurred the boundaries among various nations and ethnic groups is a general trend. It has both upsides and downsides. But it is my firm belief that its benefits outweigh the negatives.
