Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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Now education funds more and more high, but because of more and more college students, the education rate of return is low, especially for low degree of population, employment situation is not significant, the unemployment rate is very high especially for low degree of population, employment situation is not significant, the unemployment rate is very high