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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46218
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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拼写做的很棒,学术词汇可适量增加;作者句法基础不错,可适当增加复杂句的使用;全文结构较为严谨。

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When I thought of this title , the lyrics of a song came into my head."Que sera , Whatever I will be,the future is not our to see." It tells me that sometime thinking too much will just bring you unnecessary anxiety and worries.So just follow your heart and focus on what you like now,do not be afraid of the unpredictable future. And when I was just a little girl,I found that I was enthusiastic about the gorgeous clothes in the shop window.The thought is different from the desire to buy them but instead of thinking how can I make them and if I can try to design clothes for people to wear.The huge enthusiasm encouraged me to start learning drawing and designing clothes for my Barbie dolls.During the process of being absorbed in my dream world,it seems like I had endless energy and the sense of achievement. However, when faced with the huge pressure of going to a good school,my parents urged me to concentrate on my study.So the conflicts between designing and study finally occurred,and at that time,I did not have enough beliefs for my dream.Besides,I was not sure if I could succeed in the career of designing finally.Because all the people around me told me that chasing for designing clothes must be too hard to stick to it.Therefore, in the end,as the results of the fear of the future,I gave it up. As I grew up gradually,I found that dream is the most important gift for everyone's life,which I should cherish and try my best to fulfill it instead of giving it up. The only lucky thing is that it is still not to late for me to keep on my dream. And it is also not late for everyone,unless you have the dream with perseverance to stick to it. Back to the question"what I will be",I will be the person I want to be ,I will live the life I dream for.

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