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文中学术词汇使用较少，但单词拼写做的很棒；句法方面做的很棒，加强复杂句的使用；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。
With the development of the world, English has become an international language.It is various in many fields,like education, science, and our daily life. Communicate is a direct way to let other know what you think about.If you can't let other people understand you, they may mistake what your real means.It is unforgivable if this happen between two countries,because war must be broke out soon.There are more and more foreigners come and travel in China.Our duty is to make a friendly atmosphere for those tourisms.If someone get into trouble, we need to help them ,but if we can't speak English,how can we help them? To sum up, we need to learn English.Firstly,when we wake up in the early morning,we can listen to BBC radio or other English radio.Secondly, we should do some English exercises and read English book every day.Last but not least,we need to speak as much as we can. I think if you do what I suggest, you English will improve a lot soon.
