采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;若注意一些句子错误,文章会更漂亮;作者词汇量偏少,不过单词拼写方面做的不错;可以适当增加副词的使用。
There is no doubt that smoking is bad for our body. What are smoking of effect that it will have bad effect in our heart and cause heart disease and cancer. It is reported that 2.5 million people die each year because of smoking all over the world. In my opinion,it is hard to quit smoking because people is used to doing it and cigarette has nicotine that make people like it. In fact, people took a series of measure that warned people the harm of smoking and was not allowed smoking in public and advertised advertisng and set World No Tobacco Day.