文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;若注意一些句子错误,文章会更漂亮;可以适当增加副词的使用。
There is no doubt that smoking is bad for our body. What are smoking of effect that it will have bad effect in our heart and cause heart disease and cancer. It is reported that 2.5 million people die each year because of smoking all over the world. In my opinion,it is hard to quit smoking because people is used to using it and cigarette has nicotine that make people like it. In fact, people took a series of measure that warned people of the harm of smoking and was not allowed to smoke in public and advertised advertising and set World No Tobacco Day.