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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17423
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分77.0分
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;文章层次较为清晰;适当增加一些从句的使用,会为文章添彩。

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Nowadays, computer has become one part of man's. Someone had done the research and got that at least one people has one computer, either desktop, notebook or laptop. Computer has been one necessary thing to man. People, now, would prefer to deal with computers than communicate with each other, which makes more and more people with less inter-communication and idle face. Idle face is also said as "computer face", which is to describe how people are affected by the spread use of computer. Doctors suggest that everyday, the computer using time should not be exceed 8 hours, among the using time, people had better take some short time for eye rest. In my opinion, nowadays, using computer is one skill for us. While, we have to control ourselves best to let it does well and avid badness to us.

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