采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;请注意分段。
There is no doubt that smoking is bad for our body. What are smoking of effect that it will have bad effect in our heart and cause heart disease and cancer. It is reported that 2.5 million people die each year because of smoking all over the world. In my opinion,it is hard to quit smoking In fact, people took a series of measure that warned people of the harm of smoking and was not allowed to smoke in public and advertised advertising and set World No Tobacco Day.