采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;能够熟练使用从句并合理分配;文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;请注意分段。
There is no doubt that smoking is bad for our body. What are smoking of effect that it will have bad effect in our heart and cause heart disease and cancer. It is reported that 2.5 million people die each year because of smoking all over the world. In my opinion,it is hard to quit smoking because people is used to using it and produce addiction to smoking In fact, people took a series of measures that warn people of smoking and was not allowed to smoke in public and advertised advertising and set World No Tobacco Day.