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There is no doubt that smoking is bad for our body and it is typical of people to smoke ciga. What are smoking of effect that it will have bad effect in our heart and cause heart disease and cancer. It is reported that 2.5 million people die each year because of smoking all over the world. In my opinion,it is hard to quit smoking because people is used to using it and produce addiction to smoking In fact, people took a series of measure that warn people of smoking and was not allowed to smoke in public and advertised advertising and set World No Tobacco Day.