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2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(55):SMOKING

发布时间:2014-11-27 11:01浏览次数:747
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请根据下面提示,写一篇题目为SMOKING的短文。词数100此左右。开头部分已给出。
吸烟的危害:心脏病,癌,全世界每年有二百五十万人死于与吸烟有关的疾病。
戒烟难的原因:形成习惯,内含尼古丁,使人上瘾。
已采取的措施:警告人们吸烟的危害,公共场所禁止吸烟,报纸禁止香烟广告,世界无烟日设定。
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作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;如果增加些复杂句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。

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There is no doubt that smoking is bad for people’s health. Smoking can lead to heart disease, cancer and other problems and 2.5 people die from smoking each year. Still, many people find it difficult to stop smoking. One reason is that smoking usually becomes a habit, which is not easy to be given up. Another reason is the effect of nicotine, which is contained in tobacco. Measures have been taken to help people keep away from the harm of smoking. In many cities smoking is forbidden in public places. The danger of smoking is warned of everywhere. And newspapers are asked not to publish advertisements for cigarettes. World “No Smoking Day” has been set against smoking.

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