作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;从句使用很棒,但简单句比重偏高;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。
There is no doubt that smoking is bad for people’s health. Smoking can lead to heart disease, cancer and other problems and it is reported that 2.5 people die from smoking each year. Still, many people find it difficult to stop smoking. One reason is that smoking usually becomes a habit, which is not easy to be given up. Another reason is the effect of nicotine, which is contained in tobacco. Measures have been taken to help people keep away from the harm of smoking. In many cities smoking is forbidden in public places. The danger of smoking is warned of everywhere. The newspapers asked not to publish advertisements for cigarettes. World “No Smoking Day” has been set against smoking.