高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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Before that my hometownwas very beatiuful and made me happy .There are many trees around our hometown's town. The river can make people see under the water clearly. Even if we could see some fish was playing games. That is very funnny.The house were easy and the street's wide was samell.The people lives were poor and hard.Now that many high building are set up .All kinds of transportation acts in the street.Because of industrial development ，the enviroument changed more and more bad.Therefore ,some trees reduced and some fish disapperad.lt is importent for us to save the pollution.