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字数：300 满分：100分
文章层次较为清晰；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；词汇表达较丰富，学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间，文中有些单词拼错了。
With the improvement of life,now so many people has being more and more rich.So that now many people do not care about their money in daily life,and overconsuming has becoming a fashion in the recent years.Actually,it is unwise to use up the money in today. With the time go by,the number of people think it is unnecessary to save money.And in their eyes,all the people should pay more attention to the current life and enjoy today.However,it is not the truth.Why I say that?there are some of my opinions.first,the save money is one of the precious virtues of our nation,and it has modeling a good attitude toward money for we,which contributes to form a positive minds for people.So the value of save money should never out of data.Second,everything is in changing and nobody can predict what will happen in the next second .So it is very necessay to keep the money for a raining day,which is extremely helpful to create a good envirnment to live. As far as I am concerned,all of us should learn how to manage our money and inherit the spirits of saving money.Don't spend so much money on the luxury but useless things.I believe our lives will be more fasciating and colorful if we can use our money in a sensible way.
