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字数：300 满分：100分
作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达，但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；文章层次较为清晰。
With the improvement of life,now so many people has been more and more rich.So that now many people do not care about their money in daily life,and over-consuming has becoming a fashion in recent years.Actually,it is unwise to use up the money in today. With the time goes by,the number of people think it is unnecessary to save money.And in their eyes,all the people should pay more attention to the current life and enjoy today.However,it is not the truth.Why I say that?There are some of my opinions.First,the value of saving money is one of the virtues of our nation,and it has modeling a good attitude toward money for we,which contributes to form a correct minds for people.So the value of saving money should be never out of data.Second,everything is in changing and nobody can predict what will happen in the next second.So it is very necessary to keep the money for a raining day,which is extremely helpful to create a good environment to live. As far as I am concerned,all of us should learn how to manage our money and inherit the tradition of saving money.Don't spend so much money on the luxury but useless things.I believe our lives will be more fascinating and colorful if we can use our money in a sensible way.
