作者学术词汇使用比较准确,不过文中词汇表达贫乏;作者在句法层面做的很棒;文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑,结构缺少组织;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
The author based on the interest,read the relevant information both at home and abroad established the festival of China and the United States as the theme of the paper topics. To study the paper topics, It help students better understand English culture.To enhance the level of English and to improve the students' English application ability and analysis problem, problem-solving ability.
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