2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

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Nowday ,increasing of people use of mobile phone in life and it really bring account of convinient in our life.We can chat with other wherever they want,scant everyday news and so on.Mobile phone is a important part in our life. Recent,there are many people agree we are overusing of Mobile phone. Firstly,People using phone and forget they are in danger.As show in this picture,people are crossing the street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see. Secrod,People pay much time on phone and less time with their friends.More people like using cell phone to Virtual World and they pay all day in it.So as the long time go,the will lose old friends trick and become along. Third,more and more people using cell phone but don't pretect their information.Recent years,increasing Internet secuiry and it bring out lose for custment,because their are overusing the mobile pone. In my opinion ,we using cell phone not only know how to using it to imprent our life but also know how to protect the bad effect on life.