2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):手机

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Nowday,increasing of people use of mobile phone in life and cell pone really bring account of convinient in our life.We can chat with other wherever they want,reading news and so on.Mobile phone is an important part in our life. Recent,there are many people agree we are overusing of Mobile phone. Firstly,People using phone and forget they are in danger.As show in this picture,people are crossing the street looking at their cell phones and using walking sticks in order to see. Secrod,People pay much time on mobile phone and less time with their friends.More people like using cell phone to Virtual World and they pay all day in it.So as the long time go,they will lose old friends trick and become along. Third,more and more people using cell phone but don't pretect their information.Recent years,increasing Internet secuiry bring out lose for custment,because they are overusing the mobile pone. In my opinion,we using cell phone not only know how to use it to imprent our life but also know how to protect from the bad effect on life.