2013年2月23日雅思大作文真题TASK

文章词汇表达丰富，学术词汇积累做的也很棒；作者在句法层面做的很棒；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。

School accredits student the rights of subjects choosing which can cater to their needs of interests and their innate talent.However,it has a tendency that science subjects are chose by smaller students compared with other subjects,such as art,economy,computer ,and so on,all of which have a big hit among students. According to some questionnaires conduct extensively in school,as a consequent,most of students think the most important reason which decide their choice is interests.And the reason why they hardly choose science subjects is due to its features of boring and time wasting.In addition,the career development in the future also should be taken into account,which demand students can study more practical skills to face the challenge from society.So,students are more willing to turn to those practical subjects instead of science which needs much time to explore and research. On the other hand,students find that take up the work relating to economy or IT incline to acquire abundant reward. Admitively,the decline of students working as scientists can have negative influence on development of society.Obviously,increasing number of students getting into IT or economy field will boost the increase of competition stress,in sequence,causing more unemployment problems.On the contrary,science area will standstill to develop. In the conclusion,school should more focus on develop the interests of students on science to ensure the balance advance of various field in society.