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I'm glad to take you to visit my hometown which is my favorite and the most familiar place.Anning,belongs to Kunming,Yunnan province,my hometown,is not a busy city but a small and quite urbun area. As a matter of fact,when I was a child,I always like to play in different places with my friends in my hometown.First,there is a miserable lake called Green Lake.The reason why I want to introduce it to you is that it is of great clear and every spring there are various odd birds coming to live a while.Second,I'd like to take you to the cultural street experiencing kinds of nations' activities. In conclusion,only when you come here and experience by yourself will you realize how wonderful my hometown is.Hope you will have a satisfactory trip in China.
