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We often say that seeing is beliveing.It is not unsensible when we judge some thing by seeing or hearing. Becasue someone do something is in order to get private purpose or aggresivation. We need to analyse the reason and think why they are say that,there are different opinions for differetn person even for the same thing. Considering all of aspects,then get a conclustion which is more sensible.
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