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My dear friend Ada from the U.S,plans to visit my hometown next week.To give her a terrific experience,I will show her around my hometown. My hometown,Lang Mountain,located in the southeast of Hunan province,is a beautiful tourist spot which attracts millions of tourism every year.There are 2 famous natural scenes having their own features where you will feel regreted if you don't go there.First,the Bajiao Temple,it is a mountain with 1000m height,there are all kinds of trees,flowers.birds and other animals ,once you step in it ,you'll feel relaxed.on the top of the mountain,there is a temple,with eight edges,that is exactlly how the mountain's name comes from.this temple appeals people from all around China to here ,because people believe that it can give good wills to them. Another place I want to show her around is the Fuyi river,it starts for Guangxi province,with a total length about 1000km,flows through out our little city.the water there is so clear that you can see fishs swiming freely.Can you image that on a sunny day ,you are boating in the river ,the blue sky,the fresh air with softly wind blinding,you and your best friend chating and laughing,what a happy day! I can't help waiting for Ada's coming now.
