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【题目要求】
People are frequently confronted with huge amounts of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think the advertising industry exerts an influence upon people’s lives? And what measures could be adopted to counter the risk of the disastrous effects?
【题目翻译】
应对竞争，不同公司打出各式各样的广告，霎时间，铺天盖地的广告向人们席卷而来!
广告在多大程度上影响了人们的生活?应该采取哪些措施应对广告所带来的不良影响?
【题目关键词】
advertisements; exert an influence upon; adopt measures
【写作小贴士】
此类题目是典型的blended essay的写法，开头结尾相对容易，body paragraphs分为两段展开，按照题目提问的先后顺序：首先，第一问可以写广告所带来的诸多benefits，比如：广告让我们更加清晰了解产品特点getting a better understanding of how the products work;成为大多数企业的收入来源sources of revenue;部分广告向人们宣传健康生活方式，让人们生活更加幸福快乐more contented。当然也可以写drawbacks，例如：很多商业广告的虚假宣传误导了消费者消费misleading customers;部分广告内容低俗，对青少年的身心发展不利negative effects on mental health;广告泛滥使广告形象大打折扣contribute to a bad self-image。其次，针对问题提出解决的solutions，这里可以从政府的角度切入，广告利弊兼有，政府应当积极引导，以便广告更好地服务于民众。
【写作语汇一览表】
1.in response to an advertisement回应广告
2.commercials商业广告
3.informative传递信息
4.hooks圈套
5.tricks and catchy phrases花言巧语
6.Advertising is now a circus-show.广告现在就像是在进行马戏表演。
7.be immune to the influence of advertising不受广告的影响
8.subtle不易察觉
9.a great variety of beautiful products玲琅满目的商品
【写作例句推荐】
1. The effect advertising has on our society may be subtle, and most of us remain unaware of how it molds us to fill in the particular company’s needs.
2.While advertising is useful for a host of things, from selling products, to putting public announcements on the air, some of the effects are detrimental as they can intentionally misrepresent “real” people in their commercials.
作者词汇基础扎实，拼写也很棒；文章层次较为清晰；有效的运用了一些复杂句。
Dear sir, I really appreciate you can read my application in your busy schedule. It is my dream that can apply successfully to go aboard for further study,and I firmly believe it can help me pave the way of pursuit of dream. I am (介绍你自己).As a postgraduate student,I think it was the most wonderful time I spent when it comes to my college life.To tell the truth,I really enjoy my job which can often stimulate my creative and inspiration and to help me find something new.My tutor as well as my guide for life,trying his best to dig my potential on science research.Above of all can be demonstrated by my achievements and rewards that I acquired during my study. Then,I have some experiences related to my life sharing with you.Everyone has ever undergone hardship,and you could be influenced by it so deeply that some positive changes happen to you,so did I.My major in school is nature science which demanded that trade on any valuable data or evidence to support your research provided you want your paper can convince others.Once time,I did research in measuring trace elements that contained in soil,which needed us to be enough careful and have high manipulation skills.It was no doubt a difficult task for me to accomplish it due to my poor operating ability.Obvious of the consequence,I fair to do it because of my non proficiency skill and anxiety emotion.This experience seemly not be worth being referred to for you,but it did make me gradually become more profession in the aspect of experiment operating ,since my tutor educated me that you must practiced more and do everything perfectly by your efforts if you want to be a scientist,you never saw anyone can easily become a scientist with poor abilities in certain aspect.A tiny thing but give me a lot.(失败经历) I don's know do you ever had the time when you were isolated by someone who can not reach a consensus with you.Yes,I did. How sorrow and helpless you would experience.However,the strong faith in my mind that I believe myself and I can do it,and it helped me overcome these challenges.This thing happened during the process of my experiment,I found something different of my result compared with theory consequence.Many people thought I had made mistakes in my experiment .But I did not deny my result immediately,instead,choosing to repeat my experiment again and again to find if something wrong in it.Finally, I did the hypothesis that not be found by previous researchers.Unfortunately,when I turned my idea to my tutor,he did not agree my hypothesis at all,even suspended I didn't completely pay my attention to this experiment.How sorrow I feel at that time when nobody can stand by you.Only way did persuade others was to explore the reason why this different result can be got and test it was truth.There were a saying goes that you can see the light at the end of tunnel.In the end,I found the reason was that I just utilize the other method on this experiment,and it did attest to the true of my hypothesis.The positive appraisal from my tutor and my colleagues had driven out my bad mood completely.Although I was denied by them at the beginning,thanks to their suspension to promote my research spirit which play a key role in my future research life.(对自己观点的支持) In a word,most of the experience of my research were happy ending,although it had came across some troubles.And next,I want to share some funny things about me and my school.I think the library in college for me is the same as the theme park in children' s eyes,as it is filled with unknown things as well as interesting stories that can fascinate you to explore and find.Definite to say,the library,as my the other guide except for my tutor, has given me much knowledge of problem solving.There is a saying that goes in China,read a lot and make trip further.
