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As one of the important national festival,The Dragon Boat Festival has been existing in china for thousands of years.The number of people fond of celebrating this traditional festival,and a varity of activities often are holded by some organizations to spend the special day.And it is worthy to keep this significant festival. But with the time goes by,many people prefer celebrating the western festival than The Dragon Boat Festival,so now the chinese traditional culture is suffering the serious impact.However,all of us must cannot abandon the chinese festivals,especially The Dragon Boat Festival.Why I say so much like that?There are some of my views.First, this festival has a long history in chinese,and it is the typical symbol of chinese culture,which contributes to the development of chinese culture.Second,the traditional festivals is the wealth for chinese people,and our culture will lose its energy if we ignore those meaningful festivals,which is not good to improve the social quality. All in all,it is unwise to forget the national culture,so all the people should work together to keep The Dragon Boat Festival's life and urge the traditional cultural development.
