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字数：300 满分：100分
文中词汇使用较丰富恰当，但学术词汇表达还需要很大提升；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Nowadays,collecting all kinds of coupons and joining in group-buy deals are popular among students who are careful with their expense.In my perspective,to some extent,it is a wise way to let up our expenditures.However,it can also bring out unnecessary pay. Owing to the discount or sale,we are imposed ourselves to buy more merchandise than usual,which lead to a total waste of money.What's worse,some businessmen play cunning tricks on the coupons.For instance，some coupons can only be used in a particular period and some can be valid when we consume next time.Confused by the advertisement,we can easily be victims of the con. Sum up,we should cultivate virtues of thrift.But facing with all kinds of sales,we should collect ourselves and become a wiser in consumption.
