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Angel and I had decided on inviting people to KTVwho are studying in WEB. That was on sunday. After classes, it was around 9 P.M. and 11 people to have fun together. At that time, when we are leaving to take a taxi, one of students said she had a bike and was not environment to take it, and the important was that she did not how to get there. So we walked there and the way was not far away Shimao. We were very excited when we arrived there, but the building has renovating and the KTV is in the minus thirth floor. We were disspointed as the room too narrow to move for 10 people. So we changed the biggest one. It seemed the same as the first one which we have booked it. But we did not want to waste time too much and asked waiter to arrange for us. It cost almost 400 RMB. At the begining, every body was shy to show their voice, for we do not know each other very well. And Angel to sing a song that mede me extremely surprise. She even could sing a folk song. I was very excited that to sing the second one with candy. Time passed qucikly and it was time to say goodbye. We had fun at that time except I broke Bob's glasses.
