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作者词汇量积累很好，学术词汇积累要重视；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
Angel and I had decided on inviting people to KTV who are studying in WEB. That was on sunday. After classes, it was around 9 P.M. and 11 people to have fun together. At that time, when we are leaving to take a taxi, one of students said she had a bike and was not environment to take it, and the important was that she did not how to get there. So we walked there and the way was not far away Shimao. We were very excited when we arrived there, but the building has renovating and the KTV was in the minus second floor. We were disapointed as the room too narrow to move for 10 people. So we changed the biggest one. It seemed the same as the first one which we have booked it. But we did not want to waste time too much and asked waiter to arrange for us. It cost almost 400 RMB. At the beginning, every body was shy to show their voice, for we do not know each other very well. And Angel sang a song that mede me extremely surprise. She even could sing a folk song. I was very excited that to sing the second one with candy. Time passed quickly and it was time to say goodbye. We had fun at that time except I broke Bob's glasses.
