小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend. she is a cut girl. she has long black hair, two big brown eyes and a small red mouth. her voice is better. she is good at singing. She is a clever girl. She likes reading books , playing computer games and plaay the drum. she is also nice. she often helps us and teacher . our classmates like her very much.