2007年高考英语作文真题(全国卷Ⅰ):找英语笔友

文中衔接词和过渡词使用的很棒；熟练使用了一些长难句；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用学术词汇。

With the great fluency of english writhing and burning passion , I'd like to have an english pen-pal whom i can write to and have fun. I have preference to a girl pen-pal for i am a girl,too and she'd better be aged around mine so that we are more likely to have something in common and be able to freely communicate.If possible, i hope that she is fond of traveling ,sporting and pets for i am extremely keen of them and eager to have some one who have the same passionate love to chat with! In conclusion,i definitely hope to find a penpal and share her with my taste of life here through english,meanwhile get to know the exotic world beyond my sight