2013年山东英语中考模拟试卷英语作文:关于微笑

可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累；文章用词太过单一，且单词拼写错误较多；连词使用偏少；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Living in the modern socity, we need to face too much things everyday. Everyday, you can smile to someone, the people will smile to you. Smile can make a good effort between person and person, and it can add the friending between your family and your workmaters. It can create a comfortable mood during you working. Smile can mix you in anywhere and anybody. Smile is a expression of one person, is a fettle of one person and is a attitude of one person. It can give an encourage to person who meet difficult or be in badly state. Meanwhile it can give yourself confidence during your working and living.