2013年山东英语中考模拟试卷英语作文:关于微笑

文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，但单词拼写做的很棒；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；文章结构欠严谨，基本没有衔接成分；连词使用偏少；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Living in the modern society, we need to face too many things everyday. You can smile at someone , and the person will smile at you. Smile can make a good effort between person and person, and it can add the privity between your family and your work-maters. It can create a comfortable ambience during you working. Smile can mix you in anywhere and anybody. Smile is an expression of one person, and is a fettle of one person and an attitude of one person. It can give encourage for person who is in difficult state or in badly state. Meanwhile it can give yourself confidence during your working and living.