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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4567
要求:
题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分65.0分
评语:

文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;衔接词和过渡词用的很不错;请注意分段;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

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People have a different sports as hobbies in which they find pleasure and satisfaction after long, working day. Some sports may occur weird, strange and dangerous for one while for others can be exciting and worth of trying. From lust for adventure and adrenalin, some people are attracted to different sports like bungee jumping, paragliding or rafting. They are aware of dangers that these unusual sports bring, but adventurous spirit lead them to these activities.

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