雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

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My Opinion in Traveling Aboard Nowadays with the development of economy and enhancement of living standards, more and more people go out of their home and enjoy traveling abroad. However, trips abroad are not always hung with glory, it just like a double-edged sword. Travels abroad bring us new life, and meanwhile they have underlying risks. On one hand, travels abroad do bring us fresh life. You can enjoy a completely different culture by yourselves.When you take a trip in France, you may undergo the romantic tune just like you are French. And you can see Effiel by your own eyes, not just from pictures. You can find people in the street representing the culture of France vividly, their clothes, their costume, even their smile or their sad look you meet with give you a fresh feeling about this very country. What's more, you can also buy some souvernior in the local shop, you don't have to worry about whether they are true or false commodity. On the other hand, travels abroad are not always so attractive as there are many cases of unfortunate accidents, which bring to many people deep sorrows. For example, it's not news that you read on internet or newspaper that some people killed when they stay abroad, or some was kidnapped by terrorists. One of the most significant accident, maybe all of the people in the world may know, that is the big air crush of Malasia airline MH370, in the year 2014. Traveling abroad, we need to protect ourselves, sometimes, some mishap we even cann't know how to avoid them, such as the above air crush. Besides, in other cases, we should pay more attention to our safety abroad, do what we can as possible. So, travelling abroad is a good thing, we approve it,but also we should pay more attention to our safety.