2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；上下文衔接稍显不流畅；请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，且要加强拼写检查；请注意分段。

As time goes by,more and more people use computer for computer is a useful instrument.they can get some information that they want and get in touch with friend.then you can also relaxe youselves by litsening musci,watching TV and playing games .last you may do some work through computer such as writing,shoping and so on. so the relation between man and computer is closer and closer.