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Some people say that playing a team sport, such as soccer or basketball is very popular because it has many benefits. What are the advantages of playing a team sport?
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There are three main advantages. One of them is helpful to build our bodies, such as strengthen our muscle and bones. It can be seen that those always working out are much more healthy than those staying indoors by comparing so many artists and sportsmen. Moreover, team sports are not only related to growth but also could improve participants' mental development. The spirits of teamwork, which is essential in our future life can be formed from team games, like playing football. Last but not least, playing teamwork could affect players' communication skill, which not only affect future life but has a role in improving our mental healthy. A research said that playing team sports could reduce the risk of being autistic, especial for kids. In a word, playing team sports could improve our health physically due to building muscle and bone, and could affect our mental health as getting some essential skills for future and reduce mental issues.
