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To Be a smart consumer Many of us like shopping,especially go shopping when the clothes are all in sale because in our opinions, these clothes are very cheap.However, actually ,when we think the owner of the shop is foolish,we are foolish.We just look at the price wriiten on the tag happily without thinking if we really buy something cheap.Therefore,for us, to be smart consumers is of important. We need to be a smart consumer.On the one hand,being smart when we are shopping,we can avoid buying many unneccseeary things.If we really see something very nice,we can talk with your friends,your parents to think if the thing is neccessary for you or if the material of the thing worths this price.To be calm,and then you will find that thing that you wanted is not very neccessary for you though it looks really nice. On the other hand,being a smart consumer can help us save money which is of great importance for us,the students in colleges.Sometime we buy many things that are really chea,however imperceptibly,we have wasted our time and our money.What a shame! Anyway,never think you are cleverer than the businessman.What we can do is to be a smart consumer.
