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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33578
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分77.0分
评语:

作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

To Be a Smart Consumer Many of us like shopping,especially go shopping when those clothes we like are all in sale because in our opinions, these clothes are extremely cheap.However, actually,when we think the owner of the shop is foolish,we are foolish.We just look at the price written on the tag happily without thinking if we really buy something cheap.Therefore,for us, to be smart consumers is of importance. We need to be a smart consumer.On the one hand,being smart when we are shopping,we can avoid buying many unnecessary things.If we really see something very nice,we can talk with your friends,your parents to think if the thing is necessary for you or if the material is worthy with this price.To be calm,and then you will discover that thing that you intended is not very necessary for you though it looks really nice. On the other hand,being a smart consumer can help us rescue money which is of great importance for us,the students in colleges.Sometime we buy many things that are really chea,however imperceptibly,we have misused our time and our money.What a shame! Anyway,never think you are cleverer than the businessman.What we can do is to be a smart consumer.

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