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To Be a Smart Consumer Many of us like shopping,especially go shopping when those clothes we like are all in sale because in our opinions, these clothes are extremely cheap.However, actually,when we think the owner of the shop is foolish,we are foolish.We just look at the price written on the tag happily without thinking if we really buy something cheap.Therefore,for us, to be smart consumers is of importance. We need to be a smart consumer.On the one hand,being smart when we are shopping,we can avoid buying many unnecessary things.If we really see something very nice,we can talk with your friends,your parents to think if the thing is necessary for you or if the material is worthy with this price.To be calm,and then you will discover that thing that you intended is not very necessary for you though it looks really nice. On the other hand,being a smart consumer can help us rescue money which is of great importance for us,the students in colleges.Sometime we buy many things that are really chea,however imperceptibly,we have misused our time and our money.What a shame! Anyway,never think you are cleverer than the businessman.What we can do is to be a smart consumer.