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As to the qualities crucial for our success, we can count many. Such as IQ, EQ, education and so on. Among these, I pay much emphasis on the skill of self learning. As the saying goes, teach is better than give. We should equip ourselves with the ability to learn and we can teach ourselves! A good self learning skill cannot only process our further education but also help us acknowledge ourselves well. As the prevailing of favor of success, many pursue purely the reward after success ignoring the true benefits behind it. So some of us have begun to raise the concept of lifelong process of learning. Then, naturally, we are confronted with the problem how should we learn, especially after our graduation. Self learning does help! We can try to teach us in a more efficient way. For example, my father was in short of computer knowledge which bring him lots of troubles. Every time when he need to edit papers, prepare representations or even register online, he will ask for my help. But I cannot be with him all the time. After lone period of deliberation, he decided to learn it by himself. And now, he can take his advantage of computer skills and really be relied on! Furthermore, while we are learning, we are in a process like, a kind of, reviewing. We will look close on ourselves and think deep within our heart. Who we are and what we are keen on. In other words learning by ourself is also self reflection. For instance, when I were in senior high school, I spent my whole day learning by myself, and I can satisfy what I were taught from my teachers. I were thirsty and doing my outmost to think the truth of live. I gradually keep in tune with many grant people in history. I felt I can communicate with them even without feedback. They guide me, all they way. Teach me how to distinguish good from bad and I will never hesitate at my live. Live is tracing happiness-true happiness. Admittedly, you can name many subjects about this topic. Many of them make sense in some certain circumstances. But why I choose self-learning is it can make us more and more near to perfect. On the basis of above analysis, I will say self learning is an essential ingredient of our success.