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2012年6月9日雅思大作文真题:新闻与人们生活的关系

发布时间:2013-08-07 15:51浏览次数:2675
要求:

【题目要求

Some people think news is in no connection with people's lives, therefore, it is a complete waste of time to read the news in the newspaper or watch TV news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

【题目翻译】

有些人认为新闻跟人们的生活关系不大,因此,读报纸或看电视新闻完全是浪费时间。

你在多大程度上同意或不同意这一观点?

【题目关键词】

1-news

2-in no connection with

3-a complete waste of time

4-read the news in the newspaper

5-watch TV news

【写作小贴士】

此类题目是典型的argumentative essay/report,可以遵照双边类文章的写作模式,也可以按单边类方法写作,建议单边写作,现从read news in the newspaper和watch TV news好的角度着手,首先,Reading news in the newspaper or watching TV news give families something to bond over. Both newspaper and television have led to some great conversations. Often, talking about something that occurred in a newspaper or TV show will lead to discussions of real life situations. If this is not a benefit, I do not know what is 。其次,News in the newspaper or TV news are both educational and in formative. News can be as educational as going to school。最后,We can learn about different people and places. Newspaper or TV news opens up the world, whether through watching TV news or newspaper news with multicultural characters!

【写作语汇一览表】

1-inculcate a great habit like reading in someone

2-become a passion for someone

3-one’s perseverance of this trend

4-the mounting pressure of work

5-keep someone engrossed

6-introduce someone to the different cultures around the globe

7-give you a glimpse into other cultures and places of the world

8-reduce boredom

9-break the monotony of a lazy, uncreative and boring life

10-explore a new world filled with information and ingenuity

11-make your vision blurry

12-for a wide variety of reasons

用户的作文(系统评分88.5分
评语:

文章词汇表达丰富,学术词汇积累做的也很棒;作者句法知识掌握的错误,可适当增加从句的使用;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays,all we are exposed in all kinds of news about social life that show in different forms.However,two opposition views are held by different people,as someone think that we can not neglect the influence produced by news whichever the form it is,however,the other do not so attach great importance on the importance of news due to it has less relationship with our life.Maybe,my viewpoint more trend to former. Firstly,I think it necessary to take some examples which can demonstrate your life is surrounded by news.If you are a college student who are facing to graduate from you school,maybe,the first thing you focus on most is starting a satisfied career.So,the most convenient and useful way you can get is through news which mainly about the employment tendency and national related policies to college students.Of course,you also need to pay your attention on the news of economy if you want to do some investment or take up business as a merchant.In a word,your life or job always can be linked to the news of your related fields.On the other hand,from the view of knowledge learning,reading newspaper or watch news report on TV will be your best choice.Firstly,you never feel awkward when you have a chat with others,since you can find more topics from news.Secondly,concentrating on news contributes you to promote yourself as well as your influence on others around you,as news can broad your eyesight. In the conclusion, news,as a significant mean of message transmitting,has played an important role in our social life,which is also can proceed the development of our life.

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